Thanks again :)!
Here’s the feedback I need:
The pamphlet will be used to give people that know nothing about us, more information.
1) Knowing what you now know about us, does the pamphlet accurately describe our services?
2) Also, would you feel proud giving the pamphlet out to other family or friends that you would want to refer to us to?
3) Any glaring errors?!
Please send your feedback to: info@tutoringwithatwist.ca
Here it is! (Probably best to print it to get the full effect, even if you just print in black & white.)
T-WAT Brochure Part 1
T-WAT Brochure Part 2
Comments 3
Hi Amber,
I think your brochure is looking great. I like that the business is called Tutoring with a Twist. However, I would be careful with using it in wording like “twisted parent” or “twisted student” for example, as the word twisted is used in slang in a negative sense and I wouldn’t want potential new parents to be turned off by that. So maybe consider some alternative wording that avoids that? And I’m glad to see that your emails are coming with the sender as “Tutoring …with Twist” instead of the abbreviation I’ve seen before. Much better!
Hi Amber;
There is some double wording under the “stars” section – we help students reach those stars while also giving them the confidence in themselves to reach those stars and their full potential. How about – We help students develop their confidence to reach those stars and their full potential.
Passions “this gives them they’re why and a reason to stay motivated – isn’t that the same thing?
I think it is an awesome pamphlet with a lot of really good information. Its very succinct and I think would appeal to a broad audience (language use, etc.)
Marjorie
This is very accurate